Conrad Rice

I had to keep it brief. It was for a contest and it had to be under 750 words.

This was very brilliant and witty. I'll emphasize the witty part again, simply because I liked that particular aspect of it. You really wrote a good story here. I've read ...

The Last Time A dead kangaroo was lying about a hundred yards from the building. A truck must have hit it as it passed through. He paid it no mind ...

This is okay. Not bad, but okay. I would say something about hearing Mum about every other sentence, but you're from England, so you have an excuse. You mentioned something ...

Behold A Pale Horse “Think we’ll make it?” Larry asked. Murry shrugged his shoulders and shook his head. “Don’t know, man,” he replied. Larry opened up the cooler and pulled ...

What was this story about? Yes, I know it was about a woman who loses the ability to understand what's going on around her and is thrown into an asylum. ...

I think that I am a writer because I have many wonderful stories all spinning around in my head. That alone doesn't really make me better than the common man. ...

Review for the second part. This story really came together in this second portion. One thing I thought I'd ask about. There was a woman talking to Sarah's dad at ...

This was really good. I can see now what you were telling me when you reviewed my story. But anyway, really good. I liked the way you built and maintained ...

Judy walked forward and joined Niles at the pilot’s house. He was mumbling under his breath as he steered the boat downriver. “What is it?” Judy asked. “That whole exchange ...

Encantado Judy Earnshaw walked into the party area. It was very well decorated, with odd globe lamps and torches lighting up the village square. All the townspeople had turned out ...

I liked that story. It was very well written and I can honestly say that it touched me. You really have a talent. There were a few minor grammatical errors ...

This was a good story, despite its sadness. I wish there was more to it than this. Maybe you could expound on her asking her dad to stay home. Maybe ...

This was a very nice story. The only thing I didn't like was its length. Is there any way you could expound and tell us more? Is there any specific ...

Very well written story. I liked the way you set everything up and the unexpected twist at the end. You have very good powers of description. All in all, a ...